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Oct. 11th, 2012 12:46 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
kasihyaUgh, I dislike critiques. There's this girl I barely know in my class, and I just want to say, 'Dude, what. What did I just read. The prose was lackluster, the narrator was inconsistent and made no sense whatsoever, and there was no coherency to the story. I didn't understand why anything happened when it did, other than that it was supposed to be meaningful but it wasn't.
I see that in a whole lot of these stories that we're reading. They have these closing statements that are supposed to be grand and significant, but there's nothing in the story to back them up, and it's just stupid, and I want to tell people not to try so hard because unless you do it right you come off looking like an ass.
Grumpy because stressed. I think I'm going to do these critiques after class and email them to people because I don't have the time to rewrite them to be nice.
I see that in a whole lot of these stories that we're reading. They have these closing statements that are supposed to be grand and significant, but there's nothing in the story to back them up, and it's just stupid, and I want to tell people not to try so hard because unless you do it right you come off looking like an ass.
Grumpy because stressed. I think I'm going to do these critiques after class and email them to people because I don't have the time to rewrite them to be nice.
