I really like the idea of capitalizing on the creepy codependent serial-killer vibe that Sam and Dean have going on sometimes. However, it's late, and I don't have the time to do more than this, or to give the scene justice. If I continue, it would be to take the second part and write the scene with Sam killing Brody in fairly graphic detail, while Dean looks on proudly, and there are creepy borderline-emotionally-incestuous vibes going on. The third part would be more ruminating in the style of the first, with a pleased, contented feeling to it, like "things are the way they should be, and we're a happy functional family who doesn't need anyone else".
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