Class Prompt: Dialogue
Oct. 20th, 2011 08:17 pm( Jack brings home another stray cat. Neil is preoccupied. )
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I don't think I'm going to use this one, because I can't seem to get the voices right. They're thing they'd say, but neither character has any dialogue style. Like, Kai has a very distinct way of speaking, even without the stutter. So does Nyali, and Tsuya, and Tanwen. Neil and Jack ... right now, they're amorphous and indistinct, now that I've actually started to think about characters' speech patterns. So I'm going to redo this exercise, but I like the idea that they have conversations like this.
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I don't think I'm going to use this one, because I can't seem to get the voices right. They're thing they'd say, but neither character has any dialogue style. Like, Kai has a very distinct way of speaking, even without the stutter. So does Nyali, and Tsuya, and Tanwen. Neil and Jack ... right now, they're amorphous and indistinct, now that I've actually started to think about characters' speech patterns. So I'm going to redo this exercise, but I like the idea that they have conversations like this.