Short Story: Ghosts
Oct. 12th, 2011 05:44 pmI said I'd type this up ages ago, but it's only in the past two days that I made headway and completed its typing. This is completely unedited. It actually sucks a lot more than I thought it did, which I'm going to attribute to massive leaps and bounds in my abilities as a writer and not the fact that I haven't looked at it in months.
It's also missing most of its italics, because I'm too lazy to go through and reformat this entire thing from Word.
( Ghosts )
So the ending is super-cheesy and stupid, and I'm definitely going to rewrite it., and possibly just kill it and end it differently. I had the new experience of reading this as I'm typing it, and, having forgotten what I wrote or how it was going to end, thinking, 'Wow, I hope he doesn't choose that, that'd be really stupid and unrealistic ... oh, no, he wrote it like that. What an idiot.' Gonna change that.
It's also missing most of its italics, because I'm too lazy to go through and reformat this entire thing from Word.
( Ghosts )
So the ending is super-cheesy and stupid, and I'm definitely going to rewrite it., and possibly just kill it and end it differently. I had the new experience of reading this as I'm typing it, and, having forgotten what I wrote or how it was going to end, thinking, 'Wow, I hope he doesn't choose that, that'd be really stupid and unrealistic ... oh, no, he wrote it like that. What an idiot.' Gonna change that.